Post by ~~bloodynight~~ on Feb 21, 2011 20:50:29 GMT -6
Name: Mysterycloud
Age: 30 moons
Rank: warrior
Allegiance: ShadowClan
Picture: oi53.tinypic.com/ermv0x.jpg
Appearance: Sturdy. Not the thin lean shape of a WindClan cat, not quite as muscular as the waterlogged RiverClan or the 'brave' ThunderClan. She had short legs, with a long body, making her seem miss-proportioned. She has a long snout, with long ears. Black claws glisten in the thin light, unless sheathed. Her eyes are deep; aqua, maybe like a sea. Ears tipped with black, her pelt is a deep, grayish blue. Darker stripes line down her whole back, and her overly fluffy tail is the same dark color.
Under the heavy fur on her neck, a long scar stretches across her shoulders. She had got caught in barb wire a while ago, and on her left hind-paw the barb wire is still there, grown into her skin. She hates it, but has to live with it. Another scar is on her left shoulder from the same thing. She appears to be a mix breed between a dwarf cat and a slightly bigger cat, so she is much shorter than most, nut just as strong.
words: 177
Personality: Good natured is the first thought. Self-confident is the next. Or maybe just blunt. Whatever the thought, thats pretty much her. Being quite short gets her a bunch of rude comments. So, to beat them back, she has to have a lot of fighting spirit. Mysterycloud is a very feisty cat, and will protect other cats close to her. She doesn't like being judged, because it hurts her deep inside, even if no one else knows. Mysterycloud is pretty sure she can overcome almost anything, as long as she puts her mind to it.
She had learned many good defensive moves for her small size with a long body, and she prides in her combat skills. Mysterycloud tends to avoid others, unless they are kits. But, it seems something darker lurks in the heart of the strong feline...Will she ever tell? Probably not. She has fought it down, just to become brave and loyal.
words:151
History: As a kit, she was abnormally small. Her mother was small, but not to small. She was named Blue-eyes, and she gave MysteryCloud her soft blue eyes. Her father was Darkfur, a dark blueish gray tom with white ears. She had a brother, but he was prone to sickness. They called him smallkit. Smallkit made it about 4 moons, before one chilly day claimed his life forever. Mysterykit was devastated, and feared for herself. But, she was naturally stronger and better protected against sicknesses. Mysterykit became Mysterypaw after that, only 2 moons later.
Mysterypaw had been the apprentice to Heatherpelt, a kind she-cat who was very wise. At 50 moons, she was quite and experienced warrior, and taught her many grips and defensive moves a strangely small cat like her could use. At 12 moons, she went out on her own one day. What would have been just a hunting trip turned into the worst day of her life. She had chased a rabbit to the border near carrion place, barely behind it. There was a ditch, and as she leaped she felt herself pause, then pain. A barbed wire fence had once been there, and there was nothing left but a post with some still on it.
She twisted and writhed in pain, only getting the wire stuck deeper. Luckily Heatherpelt found her, but not for hours. They never got the wire in her paw out, and she would always bare the large ugly scars. After recovering, she finished her apprenticeship and took on the name Mysterycloud, a more somber cat. She tended to look after herself more and stayed away from others for some time. She has opened up a little now, though. Mysterycloud still strives to be her best, and has proven to be very loyal. Most cats have little room for doubt. But, that dark day in her kit hood, and apprenticeship have left a deeper scar than ever suggested.
words:326
Age: 30 moons
Rank: warrior
Allegiance: ShadowClan
Picture: oi53.tinypic.com/ermv0x.jpg
Appearance: Sturdy. Not the thin lean shape of a WindClan cat, not quite as muscular as the waterlogged RiverClan or the 'brave' ThunderClan. She had short legs, with a long body, making her seem miss-proportioned. She has a long snout, with long ears. Black claws glisten in the thin light, unless sheathed. Her eyes are deep; aqua, maybe like a sea. Ears tipped with black, her pelt is a deep, grayish blue. Darker stripes line down her whole back, and her overly fluffy tail is the same dark color.
Under the heavy fur on her neck, a long scar stretches across her shoulders. She had got caught in barb wire a while ago, and on her left hind-paw the barb wire is still there, grown into her skin. She hates it, but has to live with it. Another scar is on her left shoulder from the same thing. She appears to be a mix breed between a dwarf cat and a slightly bigger cat, so she is much shorter than most, nut just as strong.
words: 177
Personality: Good natured is the first thought. Self-confident is the next. Or maybe just blunt. Whatever the thought, thats pretty much her. Being quite short gets her a bunch of rude comments. So, to beat them back, she has to have a lot of fighting spirit. Mysterycloud is a very feisty cat, and will protect other cats close to her. She doesn't like being judged, because it hurts her deep inside, even if no one else knows. Mysterycloud is pretty sure she can overcome almost anything, as long as she puts her mind to it.
She had learned many good defensive moves for her small size with a long body, and she prides in her combat skills. Mysterycloud tends to avoid others, unless they are kits. But, it seems something darker lurks in the heart of the strong feline...Will she ever tell? Probably not. She has fought it down, just to become brave and loyal.
words:151
History: As a kit, she was abnormally small. Her mother was small, but not to small. She was named Blue-eyes, and she gave MysteryCloud her soft blue eyes. Her father was Darkfur, a dark blueish gray tom with white ears. She had a brother, but he was prone to sickness. They called him smallkit. Smallkit made it about 4 moons, before one chilly day claimed his life forever. Mysterykit was devastated, and feared for herself. But, she was naturally stronger and better protected against sicknesses. Mysterykit became Mysterypaw after that, only 2 moons later.
Mysterypaw had been the apprentice to Heatherpelt, a kind she-cat who was very wise. At 50 moons, she was quite and experienced warrior, and taught her many grips and defensive moves a strangely small cat like her could use. At 12 moons, she went out on her own one day. What would have been just a hunting trip turned into the worst day of her life. She had chased a rabbit to the border near carrion place, barely behind it. There was a ditch, and as she leaped she felt herself pause, then pain. A barbed wire fence had once been there, and there was nothing left but a post with some still on it.
She twisted and writhed in pain, only getting the wire stuck deeper. Luckily Heatherpelt found her, but not for hours. They never got the wire in her paw out, and she would always bare the large ugly scars. After recovering, she finished her apprenticeship and took on the name Mysterycloud, a more somber cat. She tended to look after herself more and stayed away from others for some time. She has opened up a little now, though. Mysterycloud still strives to be her best, and has proven to be very loyal. Most cats have little room for doubt. But, that dark day in her kit hood, and apprenticeship have left a deeper scar than ever suggested.
words:326
