Post by Jaywing on Feb 23, 2011 18:11:12 GMT -6
Name: Blackpelt
Age: 25 moons
Rank: Warrior
Allegiance: ThunderClan
Picture:
Appearance: Blackpelt is a dark furred she-cat. Her pelt is very dark gray, almost black, in color. Her coat is sleek and unusually soft to the touch. It is medium in length, but keeps her warm all the same. Her eyes are a very beautiful amber in color and her eyes are one of her best features. Her legs are long and powerful, able to carry her quickly around the camp and the forest. Her tail is unusually long as well, and is a couple shades darker than her pelt. Blackpelt's body, all the same, is beautiful and sleek. However, she isn't a small female. Blackpelt is very large for a warrior, and so she is stronger than she looks. Blackpelt, despite her size, is quick on her paws and can move very quickly in any situation, unless, of course, she is tired. Blackpelt really is a force to be reckoned with.
Personality: Blackpelt is a very kind and caring she-cat. She will never leave anyone behind, even if she hates them, or they are from a different clan. She is often called disloyal because of this, but she can't help that she is so nice. Blackpelt has some extreme manners, but knows when to fight back. She will never intentionally harm another cat's feelings, unless she is extremely upset with them, which isn't often. Blackpelt is good at keeping calm in the ugliest situations. Another thing about this feline is that she is fiercely loyal to Thunderclan, granted that she will help any cat in need, no matter their clan. If she feels it is right, she will go against the code to help another in need. Blackpelt, other than that, sticks to her clan only. She likes to believe that she will someone be leader, but knows it will never happen. Blackpelt, thanks to her size, however, is a very good fighter. She is strong, and large, but swift and fierce. She will never kill another cat unless ordered to by her leader, and only her leader. This makes Blackpelt a good and loyal warrior.
History: Blackpelt was born into Thunderclan, her parents were Shadefur and Rosepetal. Rosepetal was a loving and devoted mother, but her father never played with Blackpelt and her brothers, her mother did the playing with Blackpelt, and Lionclaw, and Jaywing. Lionclaw and Jaywing were so closely bonded with Blackpelt, and Blackpelt so bonded with her brothers, that they went everywhere together, did everything together. They were closer to each other than they were to their parents. However, no matter how young Blackpelt was as a kit, she was the most mature and thoughtful of the litter. And nothing got past her.
When they were apprenticed, Blackkit became Blackpaw and her mentor was her father. He trained her hard, giving her no mercy in battle training, nor hunting practice. If she made one mistake, he would scold her. But only in the presence of other cats would he be gentle with Blackpaw. But alone, he was harsh with every mistake she made. Then one day, Lionpaw and Jaypaw, her brothers, were exploring with their mentors through the forest and overheard their father Shadefur cruelly scolding Blackpaw for a squirrel she had missed. Her brothers heard her scream aloud and rushed to help.
When they burst through the clearing to see what was going on with their sister, Lionpaw and Jaypaw saw Shadefur's paw on Blackpaw's neck, claws unsheathed and digging into her throat. Without thinking, Lionpaw threw himself at his father and tried to knock him off balance. The warrior just threw Lionpaw away from him with a mere flick of his dark gray paw. Hearing the mentors rushing toward the clearing, Shadefur let Lionpaw tackle him to the ground without a fight. When the other two warriors finally entered the training hollow, they were shocked to see what Lionpaw was doing.
They saw Lionpaw with his claws unsheathed, raking his father's dark gray pelt. They ordered him off and demanded his reason for attacking a senior warrior. But when he tried to explain, they believed him a liar. Blackpaw could see that Lionpaw wanted her support, but she knew that her father would severely harm her if she spoke against him. When she said nothing, Lionpaw was herded back to camp for punishment. Jawpaw followed his mentor as well back to camp, leaving Blackpaw alone with her father once more. Shadefur got up and shook his coat before congragulating her lie.
Blackpaw finally became a warrior after five moons of training. She knew from the moment she turned into a warrior, that her father could no longer threaten her. At the next gathering, Blackpelt spoke out of turn, revealing her father really was. "Shadefur is not who you think he is!" she yowled, joining the leaders where they sat above her and joined them so she could be seen by all the clans. When her leader tried to silence her, she ignored him and kept speaking. "During my apprenticeship, he threatened me. He scolded my harshly for every mistake I made."
She had continued her speech that she had run through her head so many times before the gathering. "Each beating was worse than the last. My brother, Lionclaw, had tried to save me from Shadefur, my own father! But I was wrong not to defend him when he was scolded by his mentor for attacking a senior warrior." Blackpelt sighed and glanced at her brother. "I knew it was wrong then, and I know it was wrong now. I do regret not aiding my brother, but I am standing here before you to say that Shadefur mustn't be trusted, ever!"
Blackpelt yowled the final words over the shocked mews of the cats below. But as she jumped down to rejoin her brothers Lionclaw and Jaywing, something thrust into her side, forcing the breath from her lungs. Towering above Blackpelt with all the fury of a thousand badgers in his icey blue eyes, Shadefur stood, pinning his own daughter to the ground. He struck her with unsheathed claws and she yowled with pain. But before Lionclaw and Jaywing could get to her, the leaders of all the clans already had. Shadowclan's leader and Riverclan's leader forced the senior warrior away easily.
Blackpelt's leader stood in front of the traitor with eyes like blue fire. Lionclaw rushed with Jaywing to help Blackpelt up. When she was on her paws again, she turned in time to see her leader, Bramblestar, looking at Shadefur straight in the eyes, and what he said to Shadefur made Blackpelt beam with warm happiness and a feeling of protection provided by her leader. Bramblestar looked Shadefur in the eyes and banished him from all the clans. "You have been a good warrior when it came to fighting and hunting," Bramblestar said with anger, his amber eyes staring fiercly.
"But when a warrior of mine treats an apprentice with such cruelty, they will be punished. Shadefur, I Bramblestar, thrust you into exile for what you have done! If you ever show your face around here again, I give my warriors permission to kill you on sight." Bramblestar turned sharply and looked at Blackpelt with worried eyes. His medicine cat, Foxfoot, had finished looking over Blackpelt for injuries. When Bramblestar asked if she had gotten any, Foxfoot shook his head. Bramblestar looked at Shadefur once more. "Release him." he said calmly to the other leaders. They nodded curtly, releasing Shadefur.
Bramblestar noticed how the Windclan leader was crouched behind Shadefur, ready to pounce on the traitor if he dared to leap at Blackpelt again. But now, the Windclan leader sat tall and wrapped her tail around her paws. Shadefur didn't move a muscle as he stared angrily at Blackpelt. Bramblestar could see Blackpelt was starting to get frightened and stepped between them. "Well, get out of clan territory. And don't come back." Bramblestar snarled as Shadefur turned to leave. Then he was gone. Later that night, Rosepetal snuck out of camp and disappeared without a trace. Since then, Blackpelt and her brothers have lived with Thunderclan as loyal warriors.
Age: 25 moons
Rank: Warrior
Allegiance: ThunderClan
Picture:
Appearance: Blackpelt is a dark furred she-cat. Her pelt is very dark gray, almost black, in color. Her coat is sleek and unusually soft to the touch. It is medium in length, but keeps her warm all the same. Her eyes are a very beautiful amber in color and her eyes are one of her best features. Her legs are long and powerful, able to carry her quickly around the camp and the forest. Her tail is unusually long as well, and is a couple shades darker than her pelt. Blackpelt's body, all the same, is beautiful and sleek. However, she isn't a small female. Blackpelt is very large for a warrior, and so she is stronger than she looks. Blackpelt, despite her size, is quick on her paws and can move very quickly in any situation, unless, of course, she is tired. Blackpelt really is a force to be reckoned with.
Personality: Blackpelt is a very kind and caring she-cat. She will never leave anyone behind, even if she hates them, or they are from a different clan. She is often called disloyal because of this, but she can't help that she is so nice. Blackpelt has some extreme manners, but knows when to fight back. She will never intentionally harm another cat's feelings, unless she is extremely upset with them, which isn't often. Blackpelt is good at keeping calm in the ugliest situations. Another thing about this feline is that she is fiercely loyal to Thunderclan, granted that she will help any cat in need, no matter their clan. If she feels it is right, she will go against the code to help another in need. Blackpelt, other than that, sticks to her clan only. She likes to believe that she will someone be leader, but knows it will never happen. Blackpelt, thanks to her size, however, is a very good fighter. She is strong, and large, but swift and fierce. She will never kill another cat unless ordered to by her leader, and only her leader. This makes Blackpelt a good and loyal warrior.
History: Blackpelt was born into Thunderclan, her parents were Shadefur and Rosepetal. Rosepetal was a loving and devoted mother, but her father never played with Blackpelt and her brothers, her mother did the playing with Blackpelt, and Lionclaw, and Jaywing. Lionclaw and Jaywing were so closely bonded with Blackpelt, and Blackpelt so bonded with her brothers, that they went everywhere together, did everything together. They were closer to each other than they were to their parents. However, no matter how young Blackpelt was as a kit, she was the most mature and thoughtful of the litter. And nothing got past her.
When they were apprenticed, Blackkit became Blackpaw and her mentor was her father. He trained her hard, giving her no mercy in battle training, nor hunting practice. If she made one mistake, he would scold her. But only in the presence of other cats would he be gentle with Blackpaw. But alone, he was harsh with every mistake she made. Then one day, Lionpaw and Jaypaw, her brothers, were exploring with their mentors through the forest and overheard their father Shadefur cruelly scolding Blackpaw for a squirrel she had missed. Her brothers heard her scream aloud and rushed to help.
When they burst through the clearing to see what was going on with their sister, Lionpaw and Jaypaw saw Shadefur's paw on Blackpaw's neck, claws unsheathed and digging into her throat. Without thinking, Lionpaw threw himself at his father and tried to knock him off balance. The warrior just threw Lionpaw away from him with a mere flick of his dark gray paw. Hearing the mentors rushing toward the clearing, Shadefur let Lionpaw tackle him to the ground without a fight. When the other two warriors finally entered the training hollow, they were shocked to see what Lionpaw was doing.
They saw Lionpaw with his claws unsheathed, raking his father's dark gray pelt. They ordered him off and demanded his reason for attacking a senior warrior. But when he tried to explain, they believed him a liar. Blackpaw could see that Lionpaw wanted her support, but she knew that her father would severely harm her if she spoke against him. When she said nothing, Lionpaw was herded back to camp for punishment. Jawpaw followed his mentor as well back to camp, leaving Blackpaw alone with her father once more. Shadefur got up and shook his coat before congragulating her lie.
Blackpaw finally became a warrior after five moons of training. She knew from the moment she turned into a warrior, that her father could no longer threaten her. At the next gathering, Blackpelt spoke out of turn, revealing her father really was. "Shadefur is not who you think he is!" she yowled, joining the leaders where they sat above her and joined them so she could be seen by all the clans. When her leader tried to silence her, she ignored him and kept speaking. "During my apprenticeship, he threatened me. He scolded my harshly for every mistake I made."
She had continued her speech that she had run through her head so many times before the gathering. "Each beating was worse than the last. My brother, Lionclaw, had tried to save me from Shadefur, my own father! But I was wrong not to defend him when he was scolded by his mentor for attacking a senior warrior." Blackpelt sighed and glanced at her brother. "I knew it was wrong then, and I know it was wrong now. I do regret not aiding my brother, but I am standing here before you to say that Shadefur mustn't be trusted, ever!"
Blackpelt yowled the final words over the shocked mews of the cats below. But as she jumped down to rejoin her brothers Lionclaw and Jaywing, something thrust into her side, forcing the breath from her lungs. Towering above Blackpelt with all the fury of a thousand badgers in his icey blue eyes, Shadefur stood, pinning his own daughter to the ground. He struck her with unsheathed claws and she yowled with pain. But before Lionclaw and Jaywing could get to her, the leaders of all the clans already had. Shadowclan's leader and Riverclan's leader forced the senior warrior away easily.
Blackpelt's leader stood in front of the traitor with eyes like blue fire. Lionclaw rushed with Jaywing to help Blackpelt up. When she was on her paws again, she turned in time to see her leader, Bramblestar, looking at Shadefur straight in the eyes, and what he said to Shadefur made Blackpelt beam with warm happiness and a feeling of protection provided by her leader. Bramblestar looked Shadefur in the eyes and banished him from all the clans. "You have been a good warrior when it came to fighting and hunting," Bramblestar said with anger, his amber eyes staring fiercly.
"But when a warrior of mine treats an apprentice with such cruelty, they will be punished. Shadefur, I Bramblestar, thrust you into exile for what you have done! If you ever show your face around here again, I give my warriors permission to kill you on sight." Bramblestar turned sharply and looked at Blackpelt with worried eyes. His medicine cat, Foxfoot, had finished looking over Blackpelt for injuries. When Bramblestar asked if she had gotten any, Foxfoot shook his head. Bramblestar looked at Shadefur once more. "Release him." he said calmly to the other leaders. They nodded curtly, releasing Shadefur.
Bramblestar noticed how the Windclan leader was crouched behind Shadefur, ready to pounce on the traitor if he dared to leap at Blackpelt again. But now, the Windclan leader sat tall and wrapped her tail around her paws. Shadefur didn't move a muscle as he stared angrily at Blackpelt. Bramblestar could see Blackpelt was starting to get frightened and stepped between them. "Well, get out of clan territory. And don't come back." Bramblestar snarled as Shadefur turned to leave. Then he was gone. Later that night, Rosepetal snuck out of camp and disappeared without a trace. Since then, Blackpelt and her brothers have lived with Thunderclan as loyal warriors.
![★[Majesticface] Avatar](http://i587.photobucket.com/albums/ss315/jayfeather25/CarltheLlama.jpg)
